Today
Today ,the first day i come to here .I should insist to do it ,to improve my English .I believe in a sentence,YOU DESIRE IT ,and I think everything happen has its reason .So i must fighting .The tomorrow is a new day,is a sunny day .
I feel so upset,because i'm facing ...breaking friendship.I dont know what should i do ,but i know i must to do someting to save it.
Good night.SWEET DREAM ~`
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Today
Today is the first day i have come to here. I should persist doing to do it, to improve my English. I believe in a sentence phrase "YOU DESIRE IT", and I think everything that happens has its reason. So I must fight on. The Tomorrow is a new day, will be a sunny day .
I feel so upset, because I'm facing ... breaking a friendship. I dont know what I should do, but I know I must to do someting to save it.
Good night. SWEET DREAMs ~`
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