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I don't know what to write a composition, I just want to write down my mood now I was very sad today, because my parents wanted to put away matty Because they think the dog will bite, it bacteria will endanger our health.

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I don't know what  how to write a composition, I just want to write down my mood now (what I feel ; would be a better option)

I was very sad today because my parents wanted to put away matty Because because (upper cases of letters are not used in the middle of a sentence; without a full stop) they think the dog will bite it  and the bacteria will endanger our health. (However, there is a factual error.)

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You could ask a vet to test Matty to see if Matty will bite for any reason. Then if he doesnt you can show that to your parents.
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I don't know what to write a composition? I just want to write down my mood now

I was very sad today, because my parents wanted to put away matty Because they think the dog will bite, its bacteria will endanger our health.

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Your dog looks so cute. Dont leave it. :).
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how cute matty is! u can bring it to doctor, dog salon or alike regularly ,to keep matty stay healthy and convincing ur parents he is okay. dnt give up!!!

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