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Respect the nature and we will (maybe) save ourselves
Recently, I have seen many disasters in this world. Some are usual occur naturely and that's it's the just nature (and it's just because we are in those places that creates a lot of trouble for us makes a lot of troubles)! But some are the consequences of our actions. We destroy, we pollute, we modify our world to our image, our desire... We want to control our world, for our needs. But we've only been are only here since for thirty thousands years and we've only been impacting our world for since two hundreds and fifty years! Thousands of generations of humans and primates have lived in on this planet, and it only just requires TEN generations to impact our world so deeply our world! We have already destroyed/modified 60% of our landscapes and extinguished 50 to 60% of the animals/vegetables!
Are we blind? We must consider that we are only a fragment of all of the nature, and that we must respect it in order to continue to live within it! We always reap what we sow! All the plastic particles within the fish are already in our stomach! We need to reduce our trash (the best trash a good trash is one the trash doesn't exist!) and we need to be more compassionate and respectful towards our environment, our brothers human or animal/human and animal
Each act we take has have (positive or negative) consequences. We need to stop polluting to pollute, to use natural products and to use less packaging (reusable or nature-friendly instead). Our future is upon us! Upon each one of us! Me, you and my neighbours
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Note:
We say since a date but not a time period. For example, we've been doing that since Tuesday or since March 13th or since we got here. We use for for time periods. For example we've been doing that for 200 years or for a week.
Many animals are never, or are hardly ever plural. These include herding and schooling animals like fish, sheep and deer. Trash is partitive comme de l'eau, thus there isn't a trash, but some trash. Adjectives don't agree in number so: our brothers human or animal, black or white.
Good job. I couldn't agree more and I hope you don't mind all of the grammar rules.
Respect the nature and we will (maybe) save ourselves
Recently, I see many disasters in this world. Some are usual: it's the nature (and it's just because we are in those places that have lots of troubles\are naturally dangerous)! But some happen as a consequence of our actions. We destroy, we pollute, we modify our world to our image, our desire... We want to control our world, for our needs. But we have only been here for thirty thousands years and... We have changed our world since two hundred and fifty years! Thousands of generations of humans and primates lived in this planet, and it just requires\takes only TEN generations to impact our world so deeply! We have already destroyed/modified 60% of our landscapes and extinguished 50 to 60% of the animals/plants!
Are we blind? We must consider we are only a fragment of all nature, and that we must respect it in order to continue to live within it! We always reap what we sow! All the plastic particles\contaminants in the fish are already in our stomach! We need to reduce our trash (a good trash is one that doesn't exist!) and we need to be more compassionate and respectful towards our environnment, our brothers, humans or animals...
Each action we take has a (positive or negative) consequences. We need to stop to polluting, to use natural products, less packaging (reusable or nature-friendly instead). Our future is upon us! Upon each one of us! Me, you and my neighbours
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