Expressing My Opinion.

Some pupils have only one day off while others have two days off and more lessons a week. Now, I would like to express my point of view.
To my mind, I prefer to study at schools where the pupils have two days off. It is better because you can evenly distribute all your homework and you should not do it a for the whole evening. Moreover, if your Saturday is free, then you can do a lot of helpful and pleasant things such as going in for sports, spending time with family and friends and reading literature.
A lot of pupils want to study six days a week; firstly, in their opinion, they return home earlier so they have more free time in the day. Secondly, pupils have fewer lessons every day which would make it is easier to remember the information learnt that day. In my view, to a certain extent, it is right, but we shouldn’t forget that they would need to should spend Saturday at school and thenceforth do their homework on at Sunday. So Thus, pupils cannot completely forget about visiting school.
All in all, no matter how many days off you have, you will receive the same number of lessons - but I am convinced that pupils should have two days off.

Good! This made for interesting reading.

-You MUST use the correct spacing after the various punction marks that we have in English as when this isn't done, your writing simply becomes erroneous and it's actually kind of irritating to be honest.