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About a movie was called <jobs> After I watched the movie called <<Steve Jobs>>, So many thoughts raise from my inner heart. Maybe that is a story about success, about how to success. The first , a dream , what’s more , a man who have a bigoted dream , that is my first impression of Steve , maybe this is one of the most important essentials if you want to be a successful man . Let me think, if you do not have a dream, how can you achieve yourself? Stay a dream to your heart, just like you sit a boat with knowing your destination. But I want to ask all of you, whether all dreams deserve to be persisted? We can not deny that Jobs’s apple is a revolution, it has already changed the world, this is the outcome, this is a outcome that we all can see. But what is the beginning? Jobs choose to leave the college and learn something he is interest in. He think that take a degree means waste time, means get a job security. So he does not want to stay in collage. And then, an accident chance, he saw the creation by his friend Woz, he think it is a good opportunity, but even Woz said that “no one want a computer. ’’ He is a lucky man. We all know that a good horse needs a talent scout. If he did not meet Mike, he can not take the financial support from Mike, he can not build his own IT Empire. The reason why people want to have a bosom friend is that they can understand you well, and know that you deserve their trust. He can support you. We must admit it , Job has a very strong perseverance ,he can give one hundred calls to the people who might give them financial support . And he can ignore the board’s decision to develop Macintosh. Although he away from his project,yeah Lisa , because of the board’s thinks . He never gives up it. He always insist his heart to do what he want to do. Maybe Jobs’s success is a unique example, we can not copy his success totally, but we can learn from these tips, we can analyze his r

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About a Movie was that is Called "Jobs"

After I watched the movie called "Steve Jobs", so many thoughts raise from my inner heart arose within me. Maybe that it is a story about success, about how to success succeed/be successful.
The My first thought was about the importance of having a dream, what’s more, a man who had a bigoted huge dream - that was my first impression of Steve. Maybe this is one of the most important essentials things [or, one of the most essential things] if you want to be a successful man. Let me think, I wonder if you do not have a dream, how can you achieve yourself what you want out of life? [or, how can you reach your full potential?] Stay a dream to your heart Keep a dream in your heart, just like you sit a boat with knowing your destination as if it were a compass in your boat, leading you to shore. [or, just as if you were in a boat, keeping your destination in mind.] But I want to ask all of you, whether all dreams deserve to be persisted followed? We can not deny that Jobs’s Apple is has caused a technological revolution. It has already changed the world, this is the outcome, this is a outcome that we all can see and we can see the effects all around us. But what is was the beginning? Jobs choose chooses/chose to leave the college and learn something he is interest in is/was interested in. He think believes/believed that take getting a degree means is/was a waste of time, means just to get a job security. So he does/did not want to stay in college. And then, an accident purely by chance, he saw the creation by of his friend Woz, he thinks/thought it is/was a good opportunity, but even Woz said that “no one wants a computer. ’’
He is a lucky man. We all know that a good horse needs a talent scout. If he did not meet Mike, he can not take couldn't have taken the financial support from Mike, he can not build couldn't have built his own IT Empire. The reason why people want to have a bosom friend is that they can understand you well, and know that you deserve their trust. He can support you.

We must admit it, Jobs had a very strong lot of perseverance. He can give one hundred calls to the people who might give them financial support He would call a hundred people to find financial backing. And he can has the resolve to ignore the board’s decision [not] to develop Macintosh. Although he moves away from his project, yeah Lisa, because of what the board’s thinks, he never gives up on it. He always insist keeps his heart to on doing what he wants to do. [or, He always maintains his resolve in doing what he wants to do.] [or, He always follows through with his vision.]
Maybe Jobs’s success is a unique example. We can not copy his success totally, but we can learn from these tips, we can analyze his r

 

 

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