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My name is Tanita.Now i live in the capital of Poland-Warsaw.It is a beautiful city!There are many historical places,museums,old churches and new buildings.The most famous place in Warsaw is the Old Town.But really it not very old,because in 1945 year this place was build after war and restore.Warsaw stand on the river Wisla and this river streamed from South to North.In Warsaw you meet the past and the present,the old and the modern.The polish people are very lovelyand friendly.It"s very nice.I like live in a beautifull city.
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My name is Tanita.<--no period needed, lets extend the sentence Now and I<--always capitalize "I" live in the capital city of Poland, Warsaw. It is a beautiful city! There are many historical places, museums, old churches and new buildings. The most famous place in Warsaw is the Old Town. But really it's not very old, because in it was rebuit and restored in 1945 after the war. year this place was build after war and restore. Warsaw stand is located on the River Wisla and this river which streams from South to North. In Warsaw you meet the past and the present, the old and the modern. The polish people are very lovely and friendly. It's very nice. and I like living in a beautifull city.
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My name is Tanita. I live in the capital of Poland-Warsaw.It is a beautiful city.There are numerous historical places,museums,old churches and new buildings.The most famous place in Warsaw is the Old Town.But it is not really very old, because in 1945 ( when you have mentioned the numeric no need to mention ''year"") this place was built after the war and restored.Warsaw situated on the Wisla river and it streames from South to North. In Warsaw you can see the past, present.The polish people are very lovely and friendly.It"s very nice place to live.I like liveing in this beautiful city.
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