my upcoming speech
The topic of my speech today is "let the foreign friends point out your mistake," my friend recommend me a web site, said where can help improve my English. So I just registered an account, where I have a few friends. I also wrote two small composition on the site. One wrote "first time", is the first time I came to this website. I hope I can learn English well. Then there is an American old man gave me a change. And he told me that although wish is hope.but hope is the meaning of success, but not with the wish. Then I wrote a second small essay. There are a lot of the modified place. Let me feel a bit ashamed. But I also appreciate the foreign friends. Thanks for their patience pointed out my mistakes, for they let me learn new knowledge.
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My upcoming speech
The topic of my speech today is "let your foreign friends point out your mistakes," my friend recommend me a website, said where I can help improve my English. So, I just registered an account, where I have a few friends. I also wrote two small compositions on the site. One wrote "first time", it is the first time I came to this website. I hope I can learn English well. Then, there is an American old man gave me a chance. And He told me that, "although, wish is hope, hope is the meaning of success, but not a wish. Then I wrote a second small essay. There are a lot of the modified places. I felt a bit ashamed. But, I also appreciate my foreign friends. I am thankful for their patience, and for pointing out my mistakes, they give me new knowledge.
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