Toefl traning 4

Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is
your generation different from your parents’ generation?

People from different generations don't have the same references ,haven't seen the same tv series or advertising and they don't have the same experiences. Though (though might not be the right word here - Maybe you mean to say "It's as though people..") people from different generation can't think the same way

My parents belong to the Baby Boomer generation and are over 60 years old . And I'm 21 years old and belong to the Y generation . It's a 40 years difference between our ages and so we didn't go through the same things .

To begin with , my parents always say "at your age" so and so ,you can only respond to them that times just change and that in 40 years the world is just so different. The first big difference is about studies (or education?), today we are pushed to do long studies study for a long time, but before people didn't went go on studies because companies needed a manual workforce and today it's mostly "intellectual" jobs. Then there is the difference about computer literacy, 40 years ago there was no computer and no internet, and those 2 things are well known among people of my age . Moreover there are the differences in tv programs , when you talk about animates animes (or cartoons) or series they just don't imagine that those can exist . and when i watch the 40 years old tv series and films I can stare the numerous and huge differences between our 2 generations.

To conclude, there are many other differences but as I'm tired I will conclude by saying that it will be exactly the same if I were to have kids,because when i see the today's children under 10 childs , they (just) look so different . So it really goes to show that the generations' gap will always exists among the different generations.

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TOEFL Traning 4

Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’ generation?

People from different generations don't have the same references, haven't seen the same series or advertising, and they don't have the same experiences. Though People from different generations can't think the same way.

My parents belong to the baby boom generation and are over 60 years old . And However, I'm 21 years old and belong to the Y generation. It's There's a 40 years difference between our ages, and so we didn't go through the same things experiences.

To begin with, my parents always say "at your age" so and so. You can only respond to them that times just have changed and that in 40 years the world is just has become so different. The first big difference is about studies. Today, we are pushed to do long studies study so much, but before people didn't went on go for studies because companies needed manual workforce. andToday though, it's there are mostly "intellectual" jobs. Then Also, there is the difference about computer literacy. 40 years ago, there was no computer and no internet, and those 2 things are well known among people of my age. Moreover, there are the differences in TV programs. When you talk about animations or series, they just don't imagine that those can exist. and When I watch the 40 year-old series and films, I can stare the numerous and huge differences between our 2 generations.

To conclude, there are many other differences. But as I'm tired, I will conclude by saying that it will be exactly the same if I were to have kids, because when I see the today's under 10 children under 10, they look so different. So it really shows that generations' gaps will always exists among the different generations.

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NOTE: I think you wrote very well. The only thing that I would watch out for are run-on sentences. Try to write sentences as concisely as possible. Other than that, I understood everything that you wrote. :)