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How to sreal a million. 1) I read a lot of feedbacks about characters and plots of this movie. 2) People only wrote about central characters and episode of the film. It was robbing. 3) I think the same as they, that center characters are really great. 4) They played excellent. 5) The episode with robbing is really good also. 6) But nobody wrote about of less importance characters and episodes. 7) I think it make this film so beautiful and funny. 8) I have two favorite moments. 9) A first moment when Nicole’s father was hating under his dirty overall own picture. 10) He did it so gently and comical. 11) Maybe this film was great too if there isn’t this moment, but I think that these moments make it so especial. 12) So also, I like the moment with cleaners. 13) Note, they scrubbed a floor. 13) Why was it scrubs and not mops? 14) After all the room was big. 15) But this moment helped Nicole to be invisible, and when chaos started she was able to hate and 16) Nobody note as she was washing one and the same brush floor, wall, column, picture... 17) And Also nobody note that there isn’t water in her bucket. 18) In this episode I want to describe two cleaners. 19) Both women were old women and they were dressed almost identically. 20) It were an old dress, an apron and a head-dress. 21) I noted only one cleaner was wear a hat. 22) This fact helped Nicole to be invisible too. 23) Cleaners were different from each other. 24) One was a tall slender with elongated wrinkled face, narrow small eyes, a straight nose and pointed chin, and a thin elongated lip. 25) Her hands were thin and her fingers were long and thin. 26) The other was shorter than first. 27) She had less wrinkled round face, small round eyes, a hooked nose, plump lips and a double chin. 28) And her hands was full with the little short fingers. 29) At this moment I want to finish.

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