Traditional or Electronic Games?

In few days The Christmas will arrive. In this writing I would like to talk about the presents of Christmas, specifically the toys.

In these days During this time, a lot of children will write a letter to The Three Wise Men do The Three Wise Men letter. They will write many toys, but I'm sure that a lot of they many of them will write in their letters that they would like to recieve electronic games while a few will write traditional games.

In my opinion, the parents should have the control of what is bought the buys because a lot of electronic games aren't are not good for children and their education.
I would like to talk with you moreabout this topic.
I hope your answers.

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Traditional or Electronic Games?

In a few days Christmas will arrive. In this writing I would like to talk about the presents of Christmas, specifically the toys. 

During this time, a lot of children will write a letter to The Three Wise Men. They will write many toys, but I'm sure that many of them will write in their letters that they would like to recieve electronic games while a few will write traditional games.

In my opinion, the parents should have the control of what is bought because a lot of electronic games are not good for children and their education. I would like to talk with you more about this topic.