FIRST POST OF THE WORLD ON NOTEBOOK YEAH Ok, I know it's not the first, but that's MY first post on my notebook So, let's do a presentation (hum, this sentence smells very bad) I'm a 18 french girl

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FIRST POST OF THE WORLD ON NOTEBOOK YEAH Ok, I know it's not the first, but that's MY first post on my notebook So, let's do a presentation (hum, this sentence smells very bad) I'm a 18 french girl living in Montpellier (beautiful city in the south of france, go check it on google !) I do 10000 mistakes / sentence and i'll love to improve my english ! I'm also ok to help english people with their french ! I'm new on this website (suscribed one hour ago ahah) so i don't know exactly what i have to wright in my notebook but i think i'm not gonna be banned (?) of the website Now, if you read this, if you're from UK, if you interested in learning french, if you're not a psychopath, if you're a student (students better because i'm a student too so i prefer speaking with people of my age), if you're kind, message me ! (too much "if" ? what do you say that ?) Ok, byyyyyye !

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FIRST POST OF THE WORLD ON NOTEBOOK YEAH

Ok, I know it's not the first, but that's MY first post on my notebook
So, let's do a presentation (hum, this sentence smells very bad)
I'm a 18 french girl living in Montpellier (beautiful city in the south of france, go check it on google !)
I do 10000 mistakes / sentence and i'll love to improve my english !
I'm also ok to help english people with their french !
I'm new on this website (suscribed one hour ago ahah) so i don't know exactly what i have to wright in my notebook but i think i'm not gonna be banned (?) of the website
Now, if you read this, if you're from UK, if you interested in learning french, if you're not a psychopath, if you're a student (students better because i'm a student too so i prefer speaking with people of my age), if you're kind, message me ! (too much "if" ? what do you say that ?)
Ok, byyyyyye !

'I'm a 18 french girl' : I'm an 18 year old French girl

'i'll love to improve my english' : I would love to improve my English

'what i have to wright' : what to write

'i think i'm not gonna be banned (?) of the website' : but I don't think I will be barred (from the site)

'from UK, if you interested in learning french' : from the UK, if you are interested in learning French

FIRST POST OF THE WORLD ON NOTEBOOK YEAH

Ok, I know it's not the first ever, but it's that's MY first post in on my notebook
So, let's me introduce myself. do a presentation (hum, this sentence smells very bad)
I'm an 18 year-old French girl living in Montpellier (beautiful city in the south of France, go check it on Google !)
I do make 10000 mistakes per sentence and i'll I'd love to improve my English !
I'm also ok to help English people with their French !
I'm new on this website (subscribed one hour ago, haha) so I don't know exactly what I have to write in my notebook but i think I'm not gonna be banned (?) of from the website. (Pas sur ce que tu veux dire ici?)
Now, if you read this and are if you're from the UK, if you are interested in learning French, if you're not a psychopath, if you're a student (students are preferable better because I'm a student too so I prefer speaking with people of my age), and kind, message me ! (too much "if" ? what do you say that ?)
Ok, byyyyyye !

[Ça marche avec les "ifs" mais est préfèrable dans la structure que j'ai proposé en haut]

Okey! :D :D

Rude ? No ! Not at all ! I'm here to improve my english, you're welcome ! ahah ! I don't know why I've wrote the verb "write" like this because I know how to write it ! (so much "write" in this sentence ahah) I think that it's a stupid mistake ("erreur bête" as we say in french) and even in french, which is my native language, I make mistakes like it, ahah About the "I", I know that I have to write it in capital letter (and I do it at school) but on my computer, it's well too much exercise for my left hand to press the "shift" key ahah but I promise, I'll make an effort only for your poetic reason I'll be glad to help you with your french ! Good times for you too !

Would I be rude if I correct some terms in your text? You seems to be nice, so I think you won't mind much if I do it. :) Well, first thing I could tell is that you should never be afraid of making mistakes, no problem about that. By the way, it is exactly how humans learn langagues and plenty of other stuffs, there are many scholars who support this view. So congrats for trying, you are on the right path. Next, let's got to the text itself. I selected only one line which brings two observations: "i don't know exactly what i have to wright in my notebook but i think i'm not gonna..." Aude, the word wright is without the "ght", so is only "write". This was a sweet mistake, acctually. I think you changed the spelling because of the sound-like similarity between "right" and "write", both words that sound the same. The other observation was centred on the first person "I", which you wrote as "i", the grammar asks the use "I" always in capital letter. Honestly, I don't know the reason, but I imagine that is matter of point out the speaker. As if there was an affirmative action occupied in showing there is a person enunciating an existence. Pretty poetic my view is, I admit it hahaha. Anyway, I will eventually post something in french, so could you help out too? Ok, good times for you Aude!

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