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Introduction Myself
Hi, my name is tony. I come from China, but now i live in America. I’m going to UWW to learn English. I speak English in the university. I am a student. I want to learn more English. I think in the future I can speak lovely English and know more about American culture.
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Introduction Myself
Hi, my name is Tony, I come from China, but now I live in America, I'm going to learn English. I am a college student, I want to learn more English, I think I can speak more fluent English in the future, and can know more about American culture.
Introducing Myself
Hi, my name is Tony. I come from China, but now i live in America. I’m going to UWW to learn English (I'm learning English at UWW). I speak English at the university. I am a student. I want to learn more English. I think in the future I can speak fluent English and know more about American culture. In my free time, I like to go to watch YouTube on the online. And I'd like to be friends with you. If you need any help to learning your Chinese, I would be glad to help. In my free time, I like to go to watch YouTube on the online.
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Hope you have lots of fun in America! ;)
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