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Pleeeease Here is the topic of my essay: Many people watch soap operas because thy find them enjoyable and realistic. What is your opinion? It goes without saying that watching soap operas is becoming more and more popular in our modern society. Some people can't stand soap operas,the others consider them as a good way to relax and forget about the daily routine. In my composition I am going to express my point of view on this issue. As for me,I strongly believe that watching soap operas is an absolutely useless activity.Firstly they last too long and the endless series soon become boring and senseless.Secondly, the majority of soap operas have very a primitive plot, which is generally based on love stories, that seem to be unreal in our life, this is the reason why I cannot agree that soap operas are realistic. Moreover, the actors in soap operas are indifferent and you can hardly believe any word they say. However, some people disagree. They consider soap operas relaxing and worth seeing in spare time. But I find such an argument unconvincing. People become addicted to watching their favorite soap opera every day, and the can do nothing else but stay in front of their TV screens, people neglect their everyday duties and it can lead to terrible consequences. In conclusion, I would like to say that everybody has their one choice, whether to watch soap operas or not. But from my point of view it is much better to watch films which make us think about serious matters than waste our time watching soap operas with mediocre acting, primitive plot and endless episodes. Pleeeaaase check this stuff))) I know there are some mistakes And one mote thing I would be happy If you could help me with my vocabulary here))) For example I would like to interchange words "watching soap operas" or just "soap operas" because they repeat themselves.
24 gen 2011 17:32
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Pleeeease

Here is the topic of my essay:

Many people watch soap operas because thy find them enjoyable and realistic. What is your opinion?


It goes without saying that watching soap opera is becoming more and more popular in our modern society. Some people can't stand them, others consider them a good way to relax and forget about the daily routine. In my composition I am going to express my point of view on this issue.

I strongly believe that watching soap opera is an absolutely useless activity. Firstly, they last too long and the endless series soon become boring and senseless. Secondly, the majority of soap operas have very a primitive plot, which is generally based on love stories that seem to be unreal in our life. This is the reason why I cannot agree that such shows are realistic. Moreover, the actors in these shows are indifferent and you can hardly believe a word they say.

However, some people disagree. They consider soap operas relaxing and worth watching in spare time. I find such an argument unconvincing. People become addicted to watching their favorite soap opera every day, and they can do nothing else but stay in front of their TV screens, people neglect their everyday duties and it can lead to terrible consequences.

In conclusion, I would like to say that everybody has a choice, whether to watch them or not. From my point of view, it is much better to watch films which make us think about serious matters than waste our time watching soap operas with mediocre acting, primitive plots and endless episodes.


Pleeeaaase check this stuff)))
I know there are some mistakes
And one more thing
I would be happy If you could help me with my vocabulary here)))
For example
I would like to interchange words "watching soap operas"
or just "soap operas" because they repeat themselves.



*Good composition overall.
29 gennaio 2011
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