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Please help to correct these SENTENCES if they have GRAMMAR mistakes [5] 1. Exposure to different cultures can encourage creativity. Due to the fact that the cultures could be recognized as the symbol of the civilization of different countries, people can draw their inspiration from these cultural traditions and customs. For example, artists can absorb cultural characteristics of other countries, such as historical or geographical features, and apply them in the artistic creation. 2. There are always some debates against genetically modified food, because some people believe that this type of food may be potentially harmful to health. It is apparent that if the gene combination of food is totally changed, it is hard to ensure the nutrition. 3. In order to cater for tourists’ tastes and needs, merchants in the tourist spots are willing to develop attractive tourism programs. 4. Governments should give priority to social welfare, especially the healthcare. Besides setting up more community hospitals, which can provide on-site medical care rapidly, the relevant departments should also allocate funds to ensure that the disadvantaged people can easily access to medical services. 5. If universities can provide scholarship to stimulate students to take postgraduate courses, they can gain more professional knowledge and deepen their understanding for specialized courses, which are essential for their future’s development. 6. People are inclined to rely heavily on high technologies in recent years, resulting in the unhealthy lifestyle. For example, the sedentary habit is connected with the overreliance on computers, which has an adverse impact on young people’s skeletal development. 7. The invention of electric cars can be regarded as part of efforts to sustain the development, because these vehicles produce less traffic fumes than their fossil fuel counterparts. 8. China’s pension fund will come under tremendous pressure to break even in coming years and as such, the government needs to gradually raise the official retirement age. Also, the aging population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, which is a necessity to postpone retirement.

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