My first day on itali.com

I'm a student from Mexico, I'm studying Mechatronics, and learning English is essential for my carreer. Today, I woke up today and decided to search for several tips to improve my English, when suddenly I found this website (<em>one word) </em>and I [1] thought that will be a good idea to be part of this community. Now I want to meet people that speak English, and that help me while I help them with their Spanish. [2]

A good reason for me to learn English is that it creates the possibility of traveling to another country, and for me to finish my career in universities that are more prepared, and with better tools, for my learning. [3]

[1] Using the word "I" so much is not necessary, as the subject has already been established earlier in the sentence. You would only need to use it again if for some reason the subject changed midway through.

[2] (a) Alternatively, you could say: "Now I want to meet people who are willing for a language exchange." Your format is fine though!

(b) Since you had been using a rather general key earlier in the sentence, it is best if this stays consistant. If you wanted to say "you", then you might have said, "Now I want to meet people that speak English, <em>such as yourself</em><em>,</em> and that help me while I help you with your Spanish." Even this is not quite as smooth as using "them" and "their", but it is doable.

[3] Or, alternatively, "...for my further education." 

NOTE: REMEMBER PUNCTUATION. ALWAYS. 

Kind of like with the capital "I", using it always makes your writing look a little more professional. 

Thank you! This was a joy to correct. 

As always, do not consider this completely revised, I am certain there is something I missed.

Good luck!

à bientôt 

My first day in itali.com

I'm a student from Mexico, I'm studying Mechatronic and learn English is essential for my carreer. Today, I woke up and decide to search several tips to improme my English and suddenly I found this web site, and I thought that will be a good idea to be part of this comunity. Now I want to meet people that speak English and help me while I help you with your Spanish.

A good reason for me to learn English is the possibility to travel another <em>country </em>and finish my career in universities more prepared and with better tool for my learning

also your english looks very good. well done.