Shiang的小作文: Apr 23, 2010

This week is mid term exams at our school.i am so busy that i don't go to bed until 1:00 a.m. i really want to go to bed early. my eyes are just like a panda.


(I have never heard the comparison to a panda's eyes before, is this common? I like it!)

Shiang的小作文: Apr 23, 2010

This week is mid term exam at our school.I am so busy that l go to bed at 1:00 a.m. I really want to go to bed early. My eyes are just like a panda's.

Thanks for people  who  help me to correct my  mistakes 

Shiang的小作文: Apr 23, 2010

This week is mid exam at our school. I am so busy that I go to bed at 1:00 a.m. I really want to go to bed early. My eyes are just like a panda's.

Your eyes are not like a panda. Your eyes are like a panda's (eyes).  But you don't need to repeat the word eyes. Capital letters are not optional.

Shiang的小作文: Apr 23, 2010

This week is mid-term exam at our school.i am so busy that i don't go to bed until 1:00 a.m. i really want to go to bed early. my eyes are just  like a panda.