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Donation If I get a lot of money, I’ll donate my money to people who are in need of help. There are three reasons for that. First, the big earthquake happened in Japan about four years ago. More than ten thousands of people died and many buildings were destroyed by the earthquake. We couldn’t deal with the emergency by ourselves, but many countries donated a lot of money to us and sent relief supplies to us. We’re very grateful of these help and we will never forget that. It’s our turn to help people by donations next. Secondly, it’s getting easier to donate our money lately. It used to take time to donate our money before, but now we can do that on the Internet easily. Some people still don’t know that. We should be interested in global issues and the donations to them. Finally, A little money can save the poor’s lives. An article that I’ve read before said we could buy a vaccine to protect them from disease for only twenty cents. If we donate one dollar, we can save five lives. That’s why if I have a chance, I want to donate my money to someone who are in need of help.

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Donation

If I had a lot of money, I would donate my money to people who are in need of help. There are three reasons why.
First, a big earthquake occuured in Japan about four years ago. More than ten thousands of people died and many buildings were destroyed by the earthquake. We couldn’t deal with the emergency by ourselves so many countries donated a lot of money to us and sent relief supplies to us. We’re very grateful for this help and we will never forget it. Now it’s our turn to help people by donationing. next. 

Secondly, it’s getting easier to donate our money. Before, it used to take a lot of time to donate our money, but now we can easily donate money on the Internet. Some people still don’t know about that. We should be interested in global issues and how we can help.

Finally, a little money can save the life of somone who is poor. An article that I read said that we could buy a vaccine to protect them from disease for only twenty cents each. If we donate one dollar, we can save five lives.
That’s why, if I get the chance, I want to donate my money to someone who is in need of help.

 

Editor's note: Very good work. You seem very generous. 

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Donation

If I get a lot of money, I’ll donate my money to people who are in need of help. There are three reasons for that.
First, the big earthquake happened in Japan about four years ago. More than ten thousand people died and many buildings were destroyed by the earthquake. We couldn’t deal with the emergency by ourselves, but many countries donated a lot of money to us and sent relief supplies. We’re very grateful for the help and we will never forget that. It’s our turn to help people by donations next.
Secondly, it’s getting easier to donate our money lately. It used to take time to donate our money before, but now we can do that on the Internet easily. Some people still don’t know that we should be interested in global issues and the donations to them.
Finally, a little money can save the poor’s lives. An article that I’ve read before said we could buy a vaccine to protect them from disease for only twenty cents. If we donate one dollar, we can save five lives.
That’s why if I have a chance, I want to donate my money to someone who is in need of help.

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