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Shopping
I went to shopping with my best friends after work off yesterday.
I wanna wanted (wanna = want to, present tense, spoken English) to buy a hat ,and i will have a travel go on a trip this weekend., but we didn't have hadn't had dinner yet,so first of all,we had need to find a restaurant to for dinner.
We were looking for a long time, when at last we found a snack bar at last, and we ordered a Ccold Nnoodle、a Rrice Nnoodle and a fried Cchicken Fryer. iIt's was very delicious and we were ate until very full.
We started to shop after dinner.First,we walked into a shop selling hats.i like (like=general statement, generally you like that shop in particular and you go there; liked=punctual statement, you found the shop and you liked it) the shop very much and all the hats are were beautiful,we tried many different styles,i bought a beach cap in the end at last.because i will go to the seaside this weekend.Then,we went to a jewelry shop and buy bought two pair of earrings.
i like my new earrings and hat very much,thanks my friends An Qi to go shopping with me
if there are any mistakes pls point it out for me,thanks.
Shopping
I went shopping with my best friends after work yesterday.
I wanted buy a hat ,and i will go to travel this weekend.but we hadn't have dinner,so first of all,we had to find a restaurant to dinner.
We were looking for a long time,we found a snack bar at last, and we ordered a cold noodle、a rice noodle and a fried chicken .it was very delicious and we ate very full.
We started to shop after dinner.First,we walked into a shop selling hats.i like the shop very much and all the hats were beautiful,we tried many different styles,i bought a beach cap in then end.because i will go to the seaside this weekend.Then,we went to a jewelry shop and bought two pairs of earrings.
i like my new earrings and hat very much,thanks my friends An Qi to go shopping with me
if there are any mistakes pls point it out for me,thanks
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