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Today I ended my first book in English. please, corretions and notes. I was angry with me. Why I not understand English? Why I can´t learn this language?. The last week I remembered one publishing, your name “le chat noir” (the black cat in English). This publishing was specialized in books for learn French with 200, 300 600 or 1000 words, in my house they are four o five books even. I think: will they be similar publishing for learn English? The last Monday I went to good place for search books, one book´s shop with English section. Good morning, I say in Spanish Good morning, the woman replied. Can I help you? Yes, I say. Know you the books published by “le char noir”? Yes, the woman say. Come with me, they are here I see them, but… I say.. they all are in French Of course, say the woman, “The chat noir” is a French publishing … do you not know? Are they similar books in English? Yes, they are, I have in the shop two publishing “Oxford book worms” and “Cambridge discovery readers” the latter with CD Audio. How much is the books? 5€ without audio and 8€ with audio. Give me the two, I say and very happy. As I say, today ends my first book in English, with audio, your name “Quick Change!” it is for 200 words style. Is the story about one girl with discover she is a witch. I am happy.

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I was angry with myself. Why do I not understand English? Why can´t I learn this language?. The Last week I remembered a publisher called “le chat noir” (the black cat in English). This publisher specializes in books for learning French with 200, 300, 600 or 1000 words. In my house there are four or five books like this one/of this kind. I thought: will they be publishing similar for learning English?

Last Monday I went to a good place for searching for books, a book shop with an English section.

Good morning, I said in Spanish.

Good morning, the woman replied. Can I help you?

Yes, I said. Do you know the books published by “le char noir”?

Yes, the woman said. Come with me, they are here.

I see them, but… I said. they all are in French.

Of course, said the woman, “The chat noir” is a French publishing company … do you not know?

Are there similar books in English?

Yes, there are, I have in the shop two publishers “Oxford book worms” and “Cambridge discovery readers” the latter with CD Audio.

How much are the books?

5€ without audio and 8€ with audio.

Give me the two (or "give me both", both es mas comun pero “the two” es corecto tambien), I said and I was very happy.

As I said, today ends my first book in English, with audio, called “Quick Change!” it is for the 200 words style (or “kind”). It is a story about one girl who discovers she is a witch.

I am happy.

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Today I finished my first book in English. Please, corretions and notes.

I was angry with myself. Why do I not understand English? Why I can't learn this language? Last week I remembered one publication, called “le chat noir” (the black cat in English). This publication was serialise in books for learning French with 200, 300 600 or 1000 words, in my house I even have four or five book. I thought: would there be a similar publication for learning English?

Last Monday I went to good place for finding books, a bookshop with an English section.

Good morning, I said in Spanish

Good morning, the woman replied. Can I help you?

Yes, I said. Know you the books published by “le char noir”?

Yes, the woman say. Come with me, they are here

I see them, but… I said.. they all are in French

Of course, say the woman, “The chat noir” is a French publisher … did you not know?

Are they similar books in English?

Yes, they are, I have in two in the shop: “Oxford book worms” and “Cambridge discovery readers” the latter with Audio CD.

How much are the books?

5€ without audio and 8€ with audio.

Give me the two, I said and I was very happy.

As I say, today I finished my first book in English, with audio, called “Quick Change!”. It has 200 words. The story is about one girl who discovers that she is a witch.

I am happy.

 

 

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This is a really good peice of written work and the mistakes you made did not stop me understanding what you meant. Keep going with your reading and you will continue to make good progress!

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