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I am here again Dear Diary, Dear Reader, I am happy !!! Only one day and it´s weekend, yippi!!! Also I am happy because I saw my mom today, the first day this year! And I am happy because I met here again nice people from around the world. Bye for now!

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Yeah, you are ought to be happy! But in my country we have only one such happy day, Sunday. So I'm going to be your comrade by happiness after 2 days: 25 hours and 40 minutes - to be exactly! Glad to your meeting with your Mom. I think it's the most pleasant time, when you are with your close people! Good night, my friend!
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Hi Yvi,

My corrections below:

I am here again

Dear Diary, good
Dear Reader, good

I am happy !!! Only one day and it´s weekend, yippi!!!
I am happy! Only one more day until the weekend, yippee!

Also I am happy because I saw my mom today, the first day this year!

I am also happy because I say my mom today, for the first time this year!

And I am happy because I met here again nice people from around the world.
And I am happy because I met nice people from around the world here.

Bye for now! nice job!

Sam H.

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