I KNOW A SPECIAL BRAND
I know a special brand called Story .It is a special brand of brazalets and neckless ,you can make the brazalet as you like. It has several pieces of silver .In gold plated...pink gold plated or rodio plates.The brazalet is of leather,silk or stones.
It's a Demark brand like Pandora, that is another brand but I don't like so much.
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I KNOW A SPECIAL BRAND
I know a special brand called Story.
It is a special brand of bracelet and necklace.
You can make the bracelet as you like. This is correct, but you might want to use the word 'however' instead of 'as'
It has several pieces of silver in gold plate, pink gold plate or rhodium plate.
The bracelet is made of leather, silk or stones.
It's a Demark brand like Pandora, which I don't like so much. 'like' is correct, but it could be misconstrued to mean that Pandora is also a Denmark brand. The second part of the sentence is unnecessarily long, you can just say that you don't like it because we already know you are talking about Pandora here
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