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Great weekend
This was another awesome weekend I had. On Friday I could finished (managed to finish) [see note 1] a very complex project and enjoy the rest of the evening.
When I'm at home I love to watch tv, not only tv shows, but videos, movies, documentaries, some reality shows, things like that...
On Saturday I slept a lot, as usual. At night I watched the UFC 188 (Ultimate Fighting Championship, it is a multi mixed martial arts competition) where I a brazilian guy won the champion belt. The fighting [see note 2] was amazing, although both fighters showed (displayed) a good fitness the Jiu-Jitsu technique gives to gave the Brazilian fighter the win (the upper hand). After the fighting the announcer always interviews the champion and the Brazilian guy spoke in three different languages: Spanish, English and Portuguese. I think those things are amazing, I love when I see people of from my country speaking in other languages, I don't know why, but I feel good seeing it.
Finishing the Later Saturday, I watched a movie called "Jobs", that movie is the Steve Jobs' biography (which tells the story of Steve Jobs' life / a biopic about Steve Jobs). I read his book some time later [note 3] and I can say that the move is vivid (true to life / realistic). I liked of the book and the movie as well. I do recommend both. The movie could have been better if the producers had showed shown more about the Steve Jobs'... Oops... I can say nothing (I shouldn't say anything) upon this point... Spoilers are bad. Aren't they?
Finally on Sunday I talked to some friends, we practiced our languages and today I'm ready to go back to my for more week job. (At least,) I think so...
Thank you for your reading and corrections.
Great job!
note 1: You can't use the past tense of can the same way in English as you do in a lot of other languages, at least not naturally. Either just use the verb alone, or "managed to" which is a bit like "consegui."
note 2: "Fighting" here refers to the way the competitors were fighting, whereas "fight" refers to the overall competition. I think you mean "fight," but "fighting isn't grammatically incorrect, it's just a different meaning.
note 3: Do you mean earlier? It seems like you're talking about seeing the movie two days ago and then reading the book afterwards. If so, you must be a fast reader!
Great weekend
This was another awesome weekend I had. On Friday I could finish a very complex project and enjoy the rest of the evening.
When I'm at home I love watching tv, not only tv shows, but videos, movies, documentaries, some reality shows, things like that...
On Saturday I slept a lot, as usual. At night I watched the UFC 188 (Ultimate Fighting Championship, it is a mixed martial arts competition) where a brazilian guy won the champion belt. The fighting was amazing, although both fighters showed a great skill/expertise, the Jiu-Jitsu techniques gave the brazilian fighter the victory. After the fighting the announcer always interviews the champion and the brazilian guy spoke in three different languages: Spanish, English and Portuguese. I think those things are amazing, I love when I see people of my country speaking in other languages, I don't know why, but I feel good seeing it.
Finishing the Saturday, I watched a movie called "Jobs", that movie is the Steve Jobs' biography. I read his book some time later and I can say that the move is vivid/lifelike/realistic. I liked of the book and the movie as well. I do recommend both. The movie could have been better if the producers had shown more about the Steve Jobs'... Ops... I can say nothing upon this point... Spoilers are bad. Aren't they?
Finally on Sunday I talked to some friends, we practiced our languages and today I'm ready for another workweek. I think so...
Thank you for your reading and corrections.
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