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about Weekend. I went to supermarket with my boyfriend last Saturday. We bought noodles and vegetables. After that, I wrote about nails and I up dated it in Websight. On Sunday, I went to see new house with my boyfriends. I am looking forward to moving this house. I had a nice weekend.

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About my Weekend

I went to the supermarket with my boyfriend last Saturday.
We bought noodles and vegetables.
After that, I wrote about nails and I up dated updated it in Websight. (updated it on a/uploaded it to a website?)

On Sunday, I went to see the new house with my boyfriends. (boyfriends?)
I am looking forward to moving into this house.

I had a nice weekend.

 

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Good job. Do you mean you updated it on, or uploaded it to a website?  (Or is there a website called Websight?) And do you have more than one boyfriend?

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