I love to go swimming

Today i went to the beach, first i have(had) to take a bus and travel for almost one hour, the weather was beautiful and the sun too. so,then when i was in the beach, a(i) left my bag on the sand and i run(ran) to the water, it was so fresh.

While i was in the water, i was seeing the birds and the things that the(it is not necessary) people was doing.

I love to go swimming

Today, I went to the beach. firt I had have to take a bus and travel for almost one hour (or you can use "an hour"). The weather was beautiful, it was sunny. and the sun too, so then When I was on the beach I left my bag on the sand and I ran to the water, it was so freshing.

While I was in the water, I was seeing saw some birds and I did what most the things that the was doing people do when they are on the beach, swim.

I love to go swimming.

Today, I went to the beach. First, I took a bus and traveled for almost an hour. The weather was beautiful and the sun was too. When I was in the beach, I left my bag on the sand and I ran to the water. It was so refreshing.

While I was in the water, I was looking at the birds and the things that people was doing.