Today
Today is my holiday : D
Today and tomorrow is successive holidays !
I am very happy !
I bought old clothing at familiar shop near my house .
I can buy many clothes very cheap price in this shop.
I like to buy clothes and put their .
Lovely clothes makes me happy :)
Especially , I love Italian and French fashion .
The point why I love Italian's , the design of it is very cool .
And the case of French's , they looks like elegant .
I feel that new clothes what we are favorite , we feel refreshment of our mind and body !
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Correzioni · 3
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I do think she means the weekend. Do Japanese refer to the weekend as holidays ?
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Oh, shoot! To add to the "holiday" thing in my corrections. If you were talking about the weekend, even though everyone takes the weekend off, they aren't holidays. Holidays are usually special things, like Christmas or New Year's.
君の休みは週末なら、週末は「holiday」ではありません。「holiday」はクリスマスやお正月など特別な休日です。
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BLUE = sounds better; RED = grammar
Today
Today is my holiday a holiday (皆さんの休み、たいてい国立）OR my day off（自分の休み、仕事や学校など） :D
Today and tomorrow is are successive holidays!
I am very happy!
I bought some old clothes at a familiar shop near my house.
I can buy many a lot of clothes at a very cheap price in this shop.
I like to buy clothes and put their ???.
Lovely clothes makes me happy :)
Especially , I especially love Italian and French fashion.
The point reason why I love Italian's , fashion is that the design of it is very cool.
And the case of French's fashion, they it looks like elegant.
I feel that new clothes what we are favorite , we feel refreshment of our mind and body ! I feel that new clothes are my favorite; they make my mind and body feel refreshed! (???)
NOTES: Last sentence was a little unclear, so I guessed. As for the countries, "Italian" is like "Italy's" and "French" is like "France's", so you don't need the 「's」/の part.
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