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Munnu's 2nd notebook entry: Feb 19, 2011 大家好, 最近, 我很忙还很病。。。 感到难过 不说跟我的朋友得在italki。。。每个人教了我很多。。 谢谢。 -白茉莉

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不得不说,开头一句很接近文言文:余忙且病甚。。。很不错。
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白茉莉?这名起的,花茶啊,张一元的。
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Munnu's 2nd notebook entry: Feb 19, 2011

大家好,
最近, 我很忙还很病。。。
(I have to say this is a wonderful phrase from a native speaker's perspective.But it doesn't comply with the grammer.Sometimes we use a noun to replace a adj to make the phrase more vivid.But you'd better not do that.)

感到难过
(You can use "很难过" or "我感到难过" instead, I bet you can tell the defference between them.)

不说跟我的朋友得在italki。。。
(This sentence confused me.I guess you want to transffer the meaning that you can't talk with friends on italki for your illness.You can say "我不能跟我的朋友在italki上说了")

每个人教了我很多。。 谢谢。
(This sentence is perfect.)

-白茉莉
(This name is not common in China.I read "李茉莉" in a famous Chinese novel--<<梦里花落知多少>>.)

May I have your email? I just want to make a friend with you, and our talking will be interesting.
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Munnu's 2nd notebook entry: Feb 19, 201

大家好,
最近, 我很忙还很生病了。。。 所以感到很难过,也不能不说跟我的朋友得在italki上说话。。。你们每
(病 is a noun, not adj. so you cannot put 很 in front of it)
个人都教了我很多。。 谢谢。

-白茉莉
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Munnu's 2nd notebook entry: Feb 19, 2011

大家好,:(这里与英文不同不用‘,’在中文中,在称呼对方名称后要用':')
最近, 我很忙而且还生很病了。。。。 我感到非常难过, 因为这原因我不能与说跟我的朋友得在italki上对话。。。每个人都教了我很多中文知识。。, 谢谢大家。

-白茉莉

Ps:I wish you could recover soon.

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