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Radio station :)
The principal aim of this proposal is to explain the reasons for starting a radio station at the college. It also suggests the programmes that will be broadcasted and how the radio station will be financed.
Benefits for college:
One, the reason why the radio station should be allowed is because a radio show takes commitment and teamwork in order to be a success. The students might learn how to work with people outside their circle of friends, incluiding those who have different backgrounds and experiences. They can even learn how to work with those who dissagree with them. Futhermore, the radio station allows students to express their opinions without being judged by others. This would not only increase the student's confidence, but would also improve their communication skills.
Sort of programmes:
Music: the main pillar in radio. There can't be a good radio station without music. Each week would be dedicated to a different kind of music, so in that way, all the musical preferences would be represented. Futhermore, news programmes would be broadcasted each hour. It is important thtat the news programme includes interviews, comments from experts and also informtation about events to carry out in the college.
Absolutely fantastic, your English is near flawless! Just a few spelling errors (I almost corrected "programmes" since in the U.S. we spell it "programs" but either are technically correct). Great job!
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