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Today`s 日記!!! Today`s Canada is so hot!!! I really didn`t want to go outside but I had to buy game so I went outside! and now, I am Playing this game which is GTA5!! do you guys know this game? It`s so funny that I`ve been playing for 5 hours!! I recommend this game!!

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Today`s 日記!!!

Today`s weather in Canada is so hot!!!
I really didn`t want to, go outside but I had to buy a game so I went outside! (Saying 'outside' twice in the sentence is redundant (saying the same thing many times))
and Now, I am playing this game which is GTA5!!
Do you guys know this game?
It`s so funny that I`ve been playing for 5 hours!!
I recommend this game!!

I agree! The weather was so hot today that I couldn't even walk my dogs. I just stayed inside enjoying the a/c, grateful I had a day off from work today. I absolutely love GTAV, it's such an amazing game. Which system are you playing it on?

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