Me too

It's been a long time since I last came here, so I came back again yesterday and I saw the small short post (writing has 1 t) I wrote yesterday and I realized that I made so many mistakes in it. So I swear I am planning to write a small short writing entry/essay/note/memo/post/jotting here everyday. (I)  (omitting the pronoun "I" is informal so I put the correction in brackets) hope everyone (There is no such word as everyfriend) who reads my small short writting (see previous correction) can give me some advice and help me to perfect it.Thank you, everybody! I also hope to make more new friends here.

Well done.

Me,too

It has been a long time since i came here.So I came back again yeasterday.And I saw the small writting I've wrote yeasterday ,I made so many mistakes in it .So I swear I will write a note here 

everyday.Hope that every one who read my note can give me some advice and help me to make it perfect .Thank you! Everybody! I also hope to make more new friends here.

It's been a long time since I last came here. So I came back again yeasterday and I saw the small short writting I wrote yeasterday. I made so many mistakes in it. So I swear I am planing to write a small short writing here everyday. I hope everyone who read my small short writting can give me some advice and help me to perfect it. Thank you everybody! I also hope to make more new friends here.

Try to avoid using the same words over again in a sentence, for example "to write a short writing". Some ideas instead could be a note, a story, an entry, etc. Good work!