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My English practice - 0910 Title : I love Katana !! I like Japanese Katana, I like its shape of blade, blade pattern, guard, grip, and I like the black one best. Sometime I’ll watch movie which are about Katana or Samurai, but I don’t like the spirit of Bushido because it always give oppressive feeling. I like to see the ronin or samurai using katana to kill people ( I mean, kill bad guys ^^ ). I request my old brother to use 3D-Max to build a Katana to give me, and it was so beautiful. Hope one day, I’ll buy one the katana which doesn’t edge. Please point out my mistakes, thank you! Chinese version : 我愛武士刀我喜歡日本武士刀，喜歡它的刀行、刀紋、劍柄、刀握，最愛黑款。有時候我都在看跟武士刀或武士有關的電影，但是我不喜歡它們的武士精神，給我一種很壓抑的感覺。我喜歡看浪人或武士用武士刀砍人(我是指，壞人) 我有拜託我哥用3D-MAX幫我做一把刀，它蠻好看的。希望有一天，我會買一把未開鋒的刀。 ( 這不是中翻英，中文是我寫給外國人士看得如果它們想學的話，這中文是給改英文的人參考的，英文才是我原味的寫作 )謝謝

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My English practice - 0910

Title : I love Katana !!

I like love Japanese Katanas, I like its shape of blade blade shape, blade pattern, guard, grip, and I like the black one most best.

Sometime I’ll watch some movies which are about Katana or Samurai, but I don’t like the spirit of Bushido because it always gives an oppressive feeling.

I like to see enjoy watching the ronin or samurai using katana to kill people ( I mean, kill bad guys ^^ ).
I request asked my old brother a favour to use 3D-Max to build a Katana for meto give me, and it was so beautiful.

Hope that one day, I’ll buy can buy one real unsharpened katana for myself.one the katana which doesn’t edge.

Please point out my mistakes, thank you!

Chinese version :

我愛武士刀
我喜歡日本武士刀，喜歡它的刀行、刀紋、劍柄、刀握，最愛黑款。

有時候我都在看跟武士刀或武士有關的電影，但是我不喜歡它們的武士精神，給我一種很壓抑的感覺。

我喜歡看浪人或武士用武士刀砍人(我是指，壞人)

我有拜託我哥用3D-MAX幫我做一把刀，它蠻好看的。

希望有一天，我會買一把未開鋒的刀。

( 這不是中翻英，中文是我寫給外國人士看得如果它們想學的話，這中文是給改英文的人參考的，英文才是我原味的寫作 )謝謝