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An short essay about "a city" and "a town" I take a English classes and our teacher asked us to write an short essay about what is better for you "a city" or "a town". I have written it and I would like you to correct it. I would be very grateful to you. What is better "a city" or "a town" Asking myself about a place where I would like to live, I cannot answer this question. Why? It would seems that I must know where I want to live. On the one hand l want to live in a city because a city has some advantages. And I would like to tell about some of them. 1. Since we are living in the world where the money are playing a big role in the life of each person I would like to live in a city because in a city I have a opportunity to get a bigger salary than in a town. 2. So that we could get a bigger salary we have to have a good education. And in a city we have a bigger opportunity for it than in a town. 3. After a hard day of working or studying, people have to have a opportunity to relax. And again a city can offer a bigger variants than a town. Of course a city also has a other advantages but I would like to finish here describing of advantages. On the other hand a town has its advantages. 1. I think one of the most important advantages of a town is more clear air. A city has any problems with it. 2. There is not crowd of people always running to somewhere in a town. If even they are, them is less than in a city. 3. It is People. There are people are more natural in a town than in a city. A town also has other advantages. I like advantages of a town and of a city. And I would like to live in a place which is among "city" and "town" in classification of place for living.

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A short essay about "a city" and "a town"

I take English classes and our teacher asked us to write a short essay about what is better for you "a city" or "a town".
I have written it and I would like you to correct it. I would be very grateful to you.

 

(не забывай то, что если у сушествительного есть прилагателное, когда тебе нужно выбрать слова "a или an" тебе нужно смотреть есть ли ЗВУК согласный или глаголы прилагателного а не сушествительного. Не забывай что звук важно. 

 

Например: "an apple, a red apple" сейчась о звуке "an FSB agent" Почему "an"? Потому что когда ты говоришь FSB у буквы "F" есть звук так "эф"  не просто "ф". 


Why? It would seem "it would seem or it seems"  that I must know where I want to live.


1. Since we are living in the world where money is playing a big role in the life of each person I would like to live in a city because in a city I have an opportunity to get a bigger salary than in a town.


Of course a city also has other advantages but I would like to finish here describing the advantages.


2. There is not crowds of people always running to somewhere in a town. If they are, then it's still less than in a city.
3. It is People. The people are more natural in a town than in a city.

I like the advantages of a town and of a city. And I would like to live in a place which is among "a city" and "a town" in the classification of place for living.

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