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Scenery in Changzhou Last week I went to an old road in Changzhou,China ,It named Biqixiang,When I walked into this old lane, The breeze was blowing my face , It was sunny and the sky is pull bluel,When I was walking around The Grand Canal from Beijing to Hangzhou,It likes back to my childhood,Though the old building had repaired,It seemed beautiful,I like the city and I also like the beautiful old building.

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Scenery in Changzhou

 

第二錯誤 - 写法与錯字 


Last week I went to on Biqixiang, an old road in Changzhou road in ,China, ,It named called Biqixiang,When I walked into this old lane, the breeze was blowing in my face.  , It was The sunny and the sky was so is pull blue. l,When I was walking around The Grand Canal from Beijing to Hangzhou. 这句的意思是說你从北京走到杭州! I was walking on the segment of the Grand Canal that runs from Beijing to Hangzhou It likes and took me back to my childhood.  Though The old buildings had been repaired, It and they looked seemed beautiful. ,I like the city and I also like these beautiful old buildings.

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Scenery in Changzhou

 

第一語法基礎錯誤


Last week, I went to an old road in Changzhou,China. ,It named Biqixiang. When I walked into this old lane, the breeze was blowing in my face. , It was sunny and the sky is full so blue. l,When I was walking around The Grand Canal from Beijing to Hangzhou,_it likes back to my childhood,Though the old building had repaired,It seemed beautiful,I like the city and I also like the beautiful old building.

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Scenery in Changzhou

 

第一語法基礎錯誤

 

Last week, I went to an old road in Changzhou,China. ,It named Biqixiang.__When I walked into this old lane, the breeze was blowing in my face. , It was sunny and the sky is so full blue. l,When I was walking around The Grand Canal from Beijing to Hangzhou, it likes back to my childhood. Though the old building had repaired, it seemed beautiful.__I like the city and I also like the beautiful old building.

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It´s so cool. You should invite me :c

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