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Today is different. It is the third day that I decide to learn English and other languges. I feel myself different I feel more happy today actually. Even I didnt finish the mission that I supposed to do, I feel freely rather than any day this year. There is someone who said that Start a new thing make people better. I really feel that deeply now. Today I wrote a diary which I wrote last time is about three month ago. I wrote that I love the days Love the city The tree seems more greener than before and so on. I thought I pick up the days that is long long away from my life. Window's opened. Today is another word for me.

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Today is different.

It is the third day that since I decided to learn English and other languages.
I feel differences in myself different. I feel more happy today actually.
Even though I didn't finish the mission that I am supposed to do, I feel more freely rather than compared to any other days this year.
There is someone who said that starting a new thing makes (1) people better.
I really feel that deeply now.

Today I wrote a diary which I wrote last time is about three month ago.
I wrote that I love the days, love the city, the tree seems more (2) greener than before and so on.

I thought I pick up the days that is long long away from my life.

Window's opened. Today is another world for me.

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(1) "starting a new thing" - is only ONE (singular) action, so the verb that follows (make) come with an 's'

(2) "more" gives the same meaning as the "-er" behind green, so only 1 of it is enough. In this case, the correct one is "-er".

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P/S: Your positivity makes me happy too, thank you :) 

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