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For days, months and years that I deprived myself to be in this social community just to get focused on my studies was like a million years being imprisoned to a 4 cornered box but gladly I'm back and I've got a few time to write in my notebook. I'm happy meet friends and to learn from my friends.
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got time
For The days, the months and the years that I deprived estranged myself to be in from this social community just to get in order to, focused on my studies, was felt like a million years being imprisoned to in a 4 cornered box. but Gladly I'm back, and I've got a few some spare time to write in my notebook. I'm happy to meet friends and to learn from my friends.
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I would recommend changing the first sentence. Split it into 2 or 3 sentences instead of one long sentence. Most of your words are correct, however the first sentence is too long and doesn't "make sense".
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