I had a good day!
I feel very happy today because I didn't waste a chance that I considered to be important with me. The start, I felt afraid and thought I can't do that. Then I thought again that why not? If not now then when! This was good chance, had to catch it. Finally, after a long ideological struggle, I decided to do and then I felt wonderful.
Thank you my friend,Gena for helped me! :)
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I had a good day!
I feel very happy today because I didn't waste a chance that I considered to be important for me. At the start, I felt afraid and thought I can't do that. Then I thought again why not? If not now, then when! This was a good chance and I had to take it. Finally, after a long ideological struggle, I decided to do it and then I felt wonderful.
Thank you my friend, Gena for helping me! :)
Hello Trung,
I am glad you had a good day.
A couple of small corrections and I reorganised one phrase to make it more natural. In English we say 'take a chance'.
Hope this helps
Bob
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