Tags/verb -ing

"Do you know where the train station is?", - Ann asked me Ann.
I didn't have any idea: "We've gotten lost, haven't we?"

- Yes, it seems so! What a rridiculousness How ridiculous to get lost in such a small village! - she smiled ironically.
- Let's go for a walk and try to find someone, shall we?
- Yes, what else can we do?

We passed a mile and found nobody. The village looked completely deserted this evening though it was only five to nine.

- Haven't you got a map?, - I said.
- No, - Ann didn't look tired at all and seemed like she started enjoying by the awkwardness of our situation. - You shouldn't worry, we still have two more hours to find the station till the last train departeds".
- I hope so, - I replied. - I wouldn't be surprised if we didn't find a single person alive here!

She laughed and made a scary face: "Boooo! Look at me, I'm a zombie girl trying to gobble you up!".

For fun I recoiled and took a battle standce: "Come here, you!"
For a second I imagined us wandering in wastelands, like the last people on the Earth, poor creatures having to drag (eke) out a miserable existence.

This was enough for Ann to take her chance, she jumped on me and started biting my neck furiously.
I admitted having suffered a dreadful (terrible) death.

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Stuff in parenthesis are better ways to say it (in my opinion) but yours are not wrong.