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The first text
Maybe no one will read this text, but I want to write it. I don’t know if it makes sense. It is very complicated to write in another language, and it is more difficult when you try to explain a personal idea.
In all conversations about my task, I don’t know why I can’t find enough words to argue my point of view. At that moment I couldn't think about my points of view in English, so I thought that it would be easier if I wrote it. Then I realized that it was just as difficult, because I haven't increased my vocabulary since I finished my English course. I am still in that situation and I still don't know how to grow my vocabulary. If anyone checks and makes corrections in this text, I would appreciated it, if they could give me some recommendations.
There are many things I would like to write about but I lose practice.
Hello Nefty,
The feelings you have are normal for many people, you have lots of ideas to express in your own language but you don't have the words to express them in another. Don't worry, it will get easier. One thing I suggest to students is to imagine how you would explain something to a small child in your language, once you have these words it is often easier to translate these words into the language you are learning.
You can learn expressions from the way people correct your writing, so in this text you will learn 'make sense' and you could also learn some present perfect. We use the present perfect to talk about things you have or haven't done in your life, but you don't say when you did these things.
One way some people learn is to use songs, try to find some slower songs that you can hear the words. Search on the internet for "lyrics" and the song name. You can sing along to practise pronunciation and you can check the meanings of words using a dictionary or translate.google.com
Hope this helps
Bob
The First Text {words in titles are capitalized in English composition}
Maybe no one will read this text, but I want to write it. I don’t know if it has meaning. It is very complicated to write in another language, and it is more difficult when you try to explain a personal idea. In all conversations about a polemic task, I don’t know why I couldn’t find enough words to argue my point of view. In that moment, I couldn't think of how to express my points of view in English, so I thought that it would be easier if I wrote it. But then, I realized that it was the same difficulty, because I didn’t hadn't grown {better="maintained", "kept up"} my vocabulary since I accomplished completed my English course. I am still in that situation and I still unknown don't know how to grow my vocabulary. If anyone checks and makes corrections in this text, I would appreciated if they give me some recommendations.
There are many things about which I would like to write, but I have lost practice.
General comments:
-Unlike in Spanish, we have to state the pronoun in English, it can't be omitted and just have the verb.
-There is a general tendency for run-on sentences. Keep sentences simple, following only one subject or thought. Things like "But then", "In that moment" are all introductory phrases that signal a new sentence.
For advice, I say just keep plugging through and writing texts as you have just done and submitting them for correction. Practice makes perfect.
The first text
May be no one will read this text, but I want to write it. I don’t know if it has meaning. Is very complicated to write in another language, and is more difficult when you try to explain a personal idea. In all conversations about a polemic task, I don’t know why I couldn’t find enough words to argue my point of view. In that moment, I couldn't think of my points of view in English, so I thought that it would be easier if I wrote it, but then I realized that it was just as difficult, because I didn’t grow expand my vocabulary since I accomplished my English course. I am still in that situation and I still unknown don't know how to grow expand my vocabulary. If anyone checks and makes corrections in this text, I would appreciated if they give me some recommendations.
There are many things about I would like to write but I have lost practice.
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