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struggling... We can fight against others and win them easily but when it comes to ourselves, we can do nothing. I mean when we have negative thoughts that lead us to hell we can't be strong nor let them go! Who make us feel down are ourselves not others, we don't prevent sadness nor depression from entering our hearts, negative energy from surrounding us nor fears from controlling our lives. We are weak unless we can control our minds and hearts. These words are too hard to be applicable I know at least for me cause the biggest and hardest fight is the one against ourselves and as it's a fight some will give up quickly, others will fail and few will rock !!! We should decide which group we are gonna choose to follow and imitate. :)

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struggling...

We can fight against others and win defeat them easily but when it comes to ourselves, we can do nothing. I mean when we have negative thoughts that lead us to hell we can't be strong nor and let them go! Who We make us ourselves feel down are ourselves not others (not anyone else), we don't prevent sadness nor depression from entering our hearts, negative energy from surrounding us nor fears from controlling our lives. (we allow sadness and depression to enter our hearts, negative energy to surround us and fears to control our lives). We are weak unless we can control our minds and hearts. These words are   too (or almost too hard) hard to be applicable apply I know at least for me because the biggest and hardest fight is the one against ourselves and as it's a fight some will give up quickly, others will fail and few will rock !!! We should decide which group we are gonna going to choose to follow and imitate. :)


"gonna"  is not correct usage in written material unless it's in a dialog, the same for "cause" instead of "because"


Very nicely written!

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