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women are always oppresed . An official figures show men earn 14.2% more per hour than women . To get the pay transparency we should set a perfect legislation side by side with a real commitment for government and employers with action from men and women at work .
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Please correct my home work as fast as you can
Women are always have always been oppressed in the workplace (this addition is not completely necessary, but it helps specify the topic about which you're writing). An Some official figures show that men earn 14.2% more per hour than women. To achieve wage equality we should set a combine better ("perfect" is not grammatically incorrect, however "better" is more realistic) legislation side by side with a real commitment from government and employers, as well as action from men and women at work .Corrected:
Women have always been oppressed in the workplace. Some official figures show that men earn 14.2% more per hour than women. To achieve wage equality we should combine better legislature with a real commitment from government and employers, as well as action from men and women at work.
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