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Hi Jose,
I was able to understand your sentences fine, but I would like to give you corrections so they sound more native. And some grammar corrections, too. Enjoy!
Two years ago, I started to go for a run RUNS. It was the first time I ran in ON the Street. because Before of that I used to practiCe other sports like football, basketball, cycling or hiking, but I had never practiCed running. In fact ACTUALLY, I WAS used to runNING very quickLY, but only when I practiCed some sportS.
Well, I started BY running about 25 minutes, without A watch, because the most important thing was to get ton fit, so I did not mind the time, the records. The most important thing was to get ton fit and I feel very good with TO FEEL GOOD ABOUT myself.
At the beginning, I used to have some pains in my body because my body was not used to practice running. But litlle by Little I continued I INCREASED THE TIME, running RAN more and more until I got to run for one hour.
Later, I started to run looking the kilometres.LOOK AT /PAY ATTENTION TO DISTANCE. I got to run 8 kilometres, 9 kilometres, 11 kilometres…For that reasonBECAUSE OF THIS/THEN I decided to sign up in FOR a race. It was a fantastic experience and a big goal for me because I had to run 10 kilometres! I took 48 minutes!!! So I was super-excited and I began to win GAIN self-confidence.
After that, I ran several popular races more, three half-MarathonS and in 2014 I ran my first Marathon, in Seville, Spain. My record was 3 hours and 51 minutes. I finished very happy/ I WAS VERY HAPPY WHEN I FINISHED, but/AND the best PART was my/THE FEELING OF satisfaction, because when you see yourself powerwful and strong, you are able whatever. CAN DO ANYTHING
Nowadays, I have started to live new experiences about rain. I THESE DAYS I`M HAVING NEW EXPERIENCES WITH THE RAIN.I am running a lot of days over the rain. I RUN A LOT IN THE RAIN.It´s an amazing experience because your compromise is higher and you can feel how your body and your mind are free and I considere THINK that is a incredible emotion inside you! TO FEEL
I really recommend you to runo ver RUNNING IN the rain! What do you think about that?
Once a summer storm caught me while running. It was an exhilarating experience for sure!!
Two years ago, I started to go for a run. It was the first time I had ever run in the street, because before that I used to practise other sports like football, basketball, cycling or hiking, but I had never practised running. In fact, I used to run very quick, but only when I practised some sport.
Well, I started running for about 25 minutes, without a watch, because the most important thing was to get fit, so I did not mind the time, the records. The most important thing was to get fit and feel very good with myself.
In the beginning, I used to have some pains in my body because my body was not used to running. But little by little I continued running more and more until I was able to run for one hour.
Later, I started to run while looking at the kilometres. I got to run 8 kilometres, 9 kilometres, 11 kilometres… For that reason, I decided to sign up for a race. It was a fantastic experience and a big goal for me because I had to run 10 kilometres! I took 48 minutes!!! So, I was super-excited and I began to win self-confidence.
After that, I ran several other popular races, three half-marathons and in 2014 I ran my first marathon in Seville, Spain. My record was 3 hours and 51 minutes. I finished very happy, but the best was my satisfaction because when you see yourself powerful and strong, you can do anything.
Nowadays, I have started to live new experiences about rain. I run a lot of days in the rain. It´s an amazing experience because your compromise is higher and you can feel how your body and your mind are free and I consider it an incredible emotion inside you!
I really recommend you to run in the rain! What do you think about that?
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