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Wednesday Good morning everyone , I woke up early today because I had to do a lot of things. Before going to work, I walked out my dog , we met many dog with owners like every morning. I went to work at 9, now I am writing in this forum but I would to do a lot of things , will be a busy day for me. Thanks

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Good morning everyone,

I woke up early today because I had to do a lot of things.

Before going to work, I walked out my dog. We met many dogs with owners just1 like every morning.

I went to work at 9, now I am writing in this forum but I would to do2 a lot of things. It will be a busy day for me.

Thanks

Footnotes

1 I think that adding this word makes the sentence sound much more natural. You could also say something like as we do every morning, though that sounds a little high-brow.

2 I’m not sure what you mean here. Perhaps I have to do do a lot of things. Se lo scrivi nell’italiano, forse ti posso aiutare più.   

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Wednesday

Good morning everyone ,

I woke up early today because I had to do a lot of things.

Before going to work, I walked out my dog. , we met many dogs with their owners like every morning.

I went to work at 9, and now I am writing in this forum,  but I would like to do a lot of things today. , It will be a busy day for me.


Thanks

Your writing continues to improve!.  When we speak, everything seems to be more of a stream of ideas and when learning to write sentences may run together.  Sometimes punctuation helps, while other times just breaking the stream of thoughts into smaller sentences is a useful approach.  I encourage you to craft smaller sentences and then later seek to join them.   Buona giornata! 

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