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This is for a speaking test. Could you help me with some corrections? Thanks!!!
My favorite type of movie is epic war movies like Mel Gibson's BRAVEHEART and Peter Jackson's The Lord of The Rings Trilogy. First of all, the stories and settings in these movies always give me a sense of history which helps me to learn more about the cultures and what it was like to live in those days. Also, the battle scenes and dramatic dialogue have inspired me a lot. It's more about standing up for ideals, the difficulties of doing so, and how your ideals influence others, which are pretty interesting and refer to even today's situations. Besides, the music that accompany the scenes are always breath-taking and leave you wanting more. I would say James Horner's composition for the movie BRAVEHEART is one of my all time favorite movie scores.
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I need some corrections, thank you!!
This is for a speaking test. Could you help me with some corrections? Thanks!!!
My favorite type of movie is an epic war movies like Mel Gibson's BRAVEHEART and Peter Jackson's The Lord of The Rings Trilogy. First of all, the stories and settings in these movies always give me a sense of history which helps me to learn more about the cultures and what it was like to live in those days. Also, the battle scenes and dramatic dialogue have inspired me a lot. It's more about standing up for ideals, the difficulties of doing so, and how your ideals influence others, which are pretty interesting and refer even to even today's situations. Besides, the music score/music that accompany the scenes are is always breath-taking and leaves you wanting more. I would say James Horner's composition for the movie BRAVEHEART is one of my all time favorite movie scores.
The Lord of the Rings is a fantasy so change your bit about cultures.
e.g. ...which helps me to learn more about the culture during the time of Brave Heart and makes me wonder what it would be like to have lived in the fantasy world of The Lord of the Rings...
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** I've lightly edited your text and removed the Lord of the Rings reference because it didn't fit with the rest of your dialogue. Lord of the Rings is set in a fantasy realm, so the comments about learning about cultures might not be considered applicable. **
My favorite type of movie is epic war movies like Mel Gibson's BRAVEHEART. First of all, the stories and settings in these movies always give me a sense of history which helps me to learn more about the cultures and what it was like to live in those days.
Also, the battle scenes and dramatic dialogue have inspired me a lot. It's more about standing up for ideals, the difficulties of doing so, and how these ideals can influence others -- which can be pretty interesting and refer to even today's situations.
Additionally, the music that accompanies the scenes is always breath-taking and leaves you wanting more. I would say James Horner's composition for the movie BRAVEHEART is one of my all time favorite movie scores.
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