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Happiness Happiness A survey conducted by CCTV asked different people for different opinions of their own sense of happiness, which aroused a heated discussion. People from all walks freely expressed their feeling of happiness. As for me, it seems that I can’t fully express my feeling of happiness of happiness even with endless elegant words. With plenty of care and help from my family and friends, happiness is always surrounding me, which makes me grow healthily and happily without complaint or sorrow. What makes me feel happiest now is that numbers of classmates are always accompanying me to fight for the bid of being admitted to good company, with which I have enough confidence to face the challenge of difficulties. As far as I am concerned, happiness is just like a warm sunshine in winter,leading us to a world filled with love, care and beauty. With a happy heart and optimistic attitude towards life, nothing would stop us from pursuing our dreams and gaining achievement. Just keep happy, and you will find everyday is a brand-new day.

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A survey conducted by CCTV asked different people for their views on their own sense of happiness, which aroused a heated discussion. People from all walks of life freely expressed their feelings of happiness.
As for me, it seems that I can’t fully express my feeling of happiness even with endless elegant words. With plenty of care and help from my family and friends, happiness always surrounds me, which makes me grow healthily and happily without complaint or sorrow.
What makes me feel happiest now is that several classmates are (always accompanying me to fight for the bid of being admitted to good company, with which I have enough confidence to face the challenge of difficulties.?)
As far as I am concerned, happiness is just like a warm sunshine in winter, leading us to a world filled with love, care and beauty. With a happy heart and optimistic attitude towards life, nothing can stop us from pursuing our dreams and gaining our goals. Just keep happy and you will find everyday is a brand-new day.

very well written!

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