In The morning ♠
In the morning , my sister and i went to the library to see what's news . We entred it , there are a lot of books , cooking books , and drawings ....etc .
I saw an interesting book called BLACK CAT written by Edgar Allan Poe , they said that is a panic story , i will read it and i hope that it will be useful to make me a doof writer .
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In the morning ♠
In the morning, my sister and I went to the library to see what's news. We enter it, there are was a lot of books. Cooking books, and drawings book, etc.I saw an interesting book called BLACK CAT written by Edgar Allan Poe.They said that it is a panic story.I will read it and I hope that it will be useful to make me a doof better writer.
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In The the morning ♠
In the morning , my sister and I went to the library to see what's news looking for some new books. We entred it in, there are was a lot of books (cooking books , and drawing ones... etc) .I saw or i found out an interesting book called BLACK CAT written by Edgar Allan Poe , they said that is a panic story , i will read it and i hope that it will be useful to make me a doof good writer .
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