Swim training

Last week l was decided to learn swim, then l called a natatorium reception to ask about the price ,lesson time, pick one coach. The reception gave me a telephone number of a swimming coach. Then I telephoned her and l called the teacher pick up the phone, she told me that if l pay the money to her, it would be RMB800 and if l pay the money to natatorium it would be RMB1000. Of course l choose the cheaper one, and she will arranged everything about the next swimming lesson. When l‘m (in formal text should be "I am") on the swimming lesson and find many people choose like me, it's can be called "business bug"？

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learning to swim

Last week l decided to learn to swim. l called the natatorium to ask about the prices, lesson times, and to pick a coach. The receptionist gave me the telephone number of the teacher. l then called the teacher, she picked up the phone and told me if l paid her the amount of money would be RMB800, and if l paid the money to the natatorium I would need RMB1000. Of course l choose the cheaper one, and she is going to arrange everything for the next swim lesson. When l‘m in the swim lesson, and I find many people who choose like me, can it be called business bug?

learn swim

Last week l decided to learn how to swim, so l called the *natatorium reception for ask about prices , lesson times, and to pick a trainer. The reception gave me my trainer's telephone number who the teacher's. Then l called the trainer, who picked up the phone and she told me that if l paid her the money directly it would cost me only  RMB800, but if l paid the money to the  natatorium it would cost RMB1000. Of course l chose the cheaper option, and she will arranged everything for my next swim lesson. **When l‘m on the swim lesson and find many people choose like me,it's can called business bug？

* In English we don't normally use the word "natatorium." In America you would go to your local fitness club if you wanted to take swimming lessons.

** I'm not quite sure what you are trying to say in the last sentence. Are you trying to say that you found out during your lesson that many other people wanted to learn to swim, just like you did?

learn swimming

Last week l decided to learn swimming,then l called the natatorium to get informations about the details of price,lesson time and coach.They gave me a phone number of one coach,and I contacted her.She told me on the phone that l could pay for a set of personal teaching lessons without informing the natatorium,the cost would be RMB800.And there would be an extra RMB200 cost in the official way.Of course I finally paid just RMB800 and she would get everything ready about the coming lessons.And I got to know that most of my classmates just made the same choices as mine.What do u say about it?