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Hello everyone,
My name is 毛志勇 .,
In fact, I also have an English name ,and it is Kelvin Lin
I'm interested in a lot of languages.I hope I can find some friends here so that we can learn together.
I am an interior designer.
It's not for nothing that interior decorators the world over look to various countries for glorious inspiration,and I am no exception. ok . But this sentence is too "strong". Assertive ?
> It is true to say that many interior decorators look for inspirations elsewhere , and I am no exception.
What is the use of an interior designer who does not have without rich experience?I just love my work interior design even as I love you .
glorious/rich > These words are too exaggerated for normal writing . ( You are writhing a casual eassy , not poetry or propaganda
Even as I love you > Too unreal and not natural .
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