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Hello everyone My name is 毛志勇,In fact, I have an English name,Kevin Lin.I'm interested in a lot of languages.I hope more friends here can learn together.I am an interior designer.It's not for nothing that interior decorators the world over look to various countries for glorious inspiration,I am no exception.What is the use of interior designer without rich experience?I love interior design even as I love you .

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Hello everyone,

My name is 毛志勇 .,

In fact, I also have an English name ,and it is Kelvin Lin

I'm interested in a lot of languages.I hope I can find some friends here so that we can learn together.

I am an interior designer.

It's not for nothing that interior decorators the world over look to various countries for glorious inspiration,and I am no exception. ok . But this sentence is too "strong". Assertive ?

 

> It is true to say that many interior decorators look for inspirations elsewhere , and I am no exception.

What is the use of an interior designer who does not have without rich experience?I just love my work  interior design even as I love you .

 

glorious/rich > These words are too exaggerated for normal writing . ( You are writhing a casual eassy , not poetry or propaganda

Even as I love you > Too unreal and not natural .

 

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