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"No future for public transport". There are problems in this easy please correct it. I live in a third world country because of that we need a good public transport, unfortunately we don't have good public transportation system due to lack of government intention. Due to this we have no future for our public transport. In our country we have public and privet bus services but both of are not provided better service for people. Government bus service are not improved since 1970, still they are maintaining the same old buses because of this they have very limited number of buses. This is the best example of our future of the government transport system. Instead of further development of that bus service they have allow private sector to run buses.Government had not been provided tax benefits for bus owners. Bus owners have no permission to increase bus fares due to this bus owner faced lots of difficulties to maintain buses.Government not allowed to change bus fare according to fuel price changes because of this some owners are not operating; on the other hand, they have to find a solution to maintain the service. Therefore they have chosen a solution, it is stop the bus at every bus stand about 15 to 20 minutes to get maximum people from every bus stand. Duse to this bus traveling time from one destination to another is increases. Due to this bus service standard fallen down and people are also suffering every day. Therefore, our bus service has no future. It is just operating for daily needs without improvement.

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"No future for public transport". There are problems in this easy essay please correct it.

I live in a third world country. Because of that we need a good public transportation system, but unfortunately we don't have good public transportation system one (no need to repeat this phrase) due to a lack of government intention intervention (other words are possible). Due to this we have no future for our public transport.

In our country we have public and privet private bus services but both of are not provided better service for people neither provides good service. Government bus services are have not improved since 1970, still they are still maintaining the same old buses, and because of this they have a very limited number of buses. This is the best example of our the future of the our government transport system.

Instead of further development of that bus service they have allowed the private sector to run buses. The government had not been provided providing tax benefits for bus owners. Bus owners have no permission to increase bus fares. Due to this the bus owners have faced lots of difficulties to maintain their buses. The government is not allowed to change the bus fare according to fuel price changes. Because of this some owners are not operating; on the other hand, they have to find a solution to maintain the service (this sentence was a little awkward but it's OK.). Therefore they have chosen a solution, it is The solution they have found is to stop the bus at every bus stand for about 15 to 20 minutes to get the maximum number of people from every bus stand. Duse Due to this the bus traveling time from one destination to another is increases. Due to this (try not to repeat "Due to this". You could just say "So" instead) bus service standards have fallen down and people are also suffering every day.

Therefore, our bus service has no future. It is just operating for daily needs without improvement.

 

In American English I would say "public transportation", not "public transport". But I think this is OK in other English dialects.

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