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Hi i`m wondering if someone can help me to correct my little essay , i can help with spanish Your favorite leisure activity Why do we love laisure activities? Can we love more than one? There are some who thinks so; while others tend to completely disagree, In my opinión we can love many leisure activities the more , the better. To begin with I believe that a leisure activitie takes us out of the rutine , makes us think different things ,and also it has to do with resting our minds, forget about problems or stress. For instance one of my favorite leisure activies is to take a walk with my dog and my boyfriend, is so simple but it makes me feel happy because I`m with them I don` t need to think about anything else, just walk, talk and laugh and it is also kind of healthy activity for our bodies to move them a Little bit. Another activity that I enjoy is provably the most commun one,it is to stay at home in a cold rainy day wearing my pijamas, sitting on my couch watching netflix and eat a lot of carbs that I probably ordered as a delivery because the idea is to stay at home and do not make any effort . After doing those activities I tend to feel more relax and happy. I`m sure it is important for everybody to be disconnected from the daily routine for a while ; it doesn`t matter what you choose as an leisure activity the important is the result, how it makes you feel.

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Hi. I`m wondering if someone can help me to correct my little essay.  I can help with Spanish.

Your favorite leisure activity


Why do we love leisure activities? Can we love more than one? There are some who think so, while others tend to completely disagree.  In my opinion, we can love many leisure activities -- in fact, the more, the better.
To begin with, I believe that a leisure activity takes us out of our routine, makes us think about new things, and also enables us to rest our minds and forget about problems or stress. For instance, one of my favorite leisure activities is to take a walk with my dog and my boyfriend.  It is so simple,  but it makes me feel happy,  because I`m with them.  I don't need to think about anything else -- I just walk, walk, and laugh.  It is also a kind of healthy activity for our bodies to move them a little bit. Another activity that I enjoy is provably the most common one:  it is to stay at home on a cold, rainy day, wearing my pyjamas/pajamas, sitting on my couch watching Netflix, and eating a lot of carbs that I probably had delivered, because the idea is to stay at home and do not make any effort . After doing those activities, I tend to feel more relaxed and happy. I'm sure it is important for everybody to disconnect from the daily routine for a while.  It doesn`t matter what you choose as your/an leisure activity; the important thing is the result -- how it makes you feel.


Muy buen trabajo.  A pesar de unos cuantos errores, su ensayo "suena" bastante natural al leerlo.



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