Diary of my life in Canada May13 I went to school and took the exam. In the morning, the train had stopped so I got the bus. But I had mistake. I wanted to southern, but I got to the bus to Northern!!

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Diary of my life in Canada　May13 I went to school and took the exam. In the morning, the train had stopped so I got the bus. But I had mistake. I wanted to southern, but I got to the bus to Northern!!! So that's why I was late for the exam. I'm so sorry for my teacher..... After the exam, I went to the cafe with my friend. I liked the cafe! It was my first time I went to the cafe. The coffee was delicious, location is good, and also there are many seats! I'll try again:) I'm sure I'm getting fat. I decided I'm gonna jog 3 times each week! From now, I'll study a little, and after that I gonna go to bed soon. I'm very sleepy. Good night.

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Diary of my life in Canada　May13

I went to school and took an exam.
In the morning, the train had stopped, so I took the bus. But I made a mistake. I wanted the southbound bus, but I got to the northbound instead!!! So that's why I was late for the exam. I'm so sorry for my teacher.....

After the exam, I went to the cafe with my friend.
I liked the cafe! It was my first time I went to the cafe.
The coffee was delicious, location was good, and also there were many seats!
I'll try again:)

I'm sure I'm getting fat.
I decided I'm gonna jog 3 times each week!

From now, I'll study a little, and after that I am going to go to bed soon.
I'm very sleepy.

Good night.

Diary of my life in Canada　May 13

Today I went to school to take my exam.
In the morning, the train had stopped so I decided to take the bus. But I made a mistake. I wanted to go south, but got on the bus going North!!! So that's why I was late for the exam. I wanted to apologize to my teacher...

After the exam, I went to the cafe with my friend.
I liked the cafe! It was my first time going to the cafe.
The coffee was delicious, the location is good, and there are also many seats!
I'll try it again:)

I'm pretty sure I'm getting fat.
I decided I'm going to jog 3 times a week!

Now I will study for a bit and go to bed soon after.
I'm very sleepy.

Good night.

Do not use wanna and gonna in written English. It is not taught in any schools in Canada or the US.

Diary of My Life in Canada　May13

Today I went to school and took my exam.
In the morning, the train had stopped so I had to take the bus but I made a mistake. I wanted to go south, but I got the bus going north!!! So that's why I was late for the exam. I'm so sorry for my teacher..... I am sorry my teacher had to wait for me.

After the exam I went to a cafe with my friend.
I liked the cafe! It was the first time I went to this cafe.
The coffee was delicious, location was good and also there are many seats!
I'll try going there again:)

I'm sure I'm getting fat.
I decided I'm going to jog 3 times a week!

For now, I'll study a little and after that I am going to go to bed soon.
I'm very sleepy.

Good night.

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