Questions

What is your name? My name is Cary.
Where are you from? I am from Venezuela.
Where do you Work? I work at a school. (la pregunta no es "Cuál es tu profesión?" Es "Dónde trabajas?")
When do you work? I work today at (la hora debe estar aquí. Por ejemplo: "I work today at 3:00 PM.")
How many children do you have? I have two children.
How old are your children? My son is three years old and my daughter is 13 years old. Para expresar la edad en inglés, debe usar el verbo "ser" (to be), no el verbo "tener" (to have).

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Questions

What is your name? My name is Cary
Where are you from? I am from Venezuela
What is your job? I am a teacher
When do you work? During the week.
How many children do you have? I have two children
How old are your children? My son is three years old and my daughter is thirteen years old.

Questions

What's your name? My name is Cary
Where are you from? I am from Venezuela
Where do you Work? I am teacher (La pregunta te dice Dónde trabajas, más NO cuál es tu profesión).
When do you work? I must work today  everything 
How many children do you have? I've got two children
How old are you children? My son has three years old and my daughter has thirteen years old.

¡Saludos hermana Venezolana!

Questions

How are your name? My name is Cary
Where are you from? I am from Venezuela
Where do you Work? Im a teacher, I work at a school
Who do you work with? I work with school children and other teachers. 
How many children do you have? i have two children
how old are you children? My son is three yers old and my daughter is thirteen yers old.